here is a rough draft of a lecture i will be giving at the end of the month on black stooges. also there is a brief description of the lecture (abstract). i can use any comments or suggestions.
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If you're supposed to include the listeners, and make then curious, and want to know more about the subject, I think you've failed.
If you want people to fall asleep while you're reading it, you hit the target!
I'm sure you've worked a lot on it and all that, but come on! Do you want people to understand it, or is your goal to use as many "difficult" words as possible.
Quote from: Lunica on March 14, 2007, 02:07:02 PM
Do you want people to fall asleep while you're reading it? Or do you just like to use looong foreign words?
It's supposed to be a technical paper, so .. :lol: The big words seem to be awkwardly placed in the paper.
Ok, so its for sound tech school?
it's an academic paper not a submission to maximum rock n' roll :lol:
Soo... what exactly is the point of your paper? I have no idea what the hell all this rhythmic stuff is about
Quote from: brian on March 14, 2007, 03:07:27 PM
it's an academic paper not a submission to maximum rock n' roll :lol:
I know, I was just mentioning it because of the lack of info in his post :)
Quote from: Dr Geek on March 14, 2007, 03:24:23 PM
Soo... what exactly is the point of your paper? I have no idea what the hell all this rhythmic stuff is about
Sometimes in school you'll have to write analytical papers on songs that deal with the technicalities; i.e. song structure, rhythm struchture, etc. It's like looking at a beautiful woman and describing her from a phisiological/anatomical viewpoint.
Quote from: bUTTHOLEmAN on March 14, 2007, 05:44:44 PM
Quote from: Dr Geek on March 14, 2007, 03:24:23 PM
Soo... what exactly is the point of your paper? I have no idea what the hell all this rhythmic stuff is about
Sometimes in school you'll have to write analytical papers on songs that deal with the technicalities; i.e. song structure, rhythm struchture, etc. It's like looking at a beautiful woman and describing her from a phisiological/anatomical viewpoint.
Right, I just don't understand what he's actually saying about the rhythms.
On page 3 you say:
QuoteThat is to say, an experience may emerge that is informed by the accrued effect of the music
Quote from: brian on March 14, 2007, 03:07:27 PM
it's an academic paper not a submission to maximum rock n' roll :lol:
touche :lol: